P4- Differences between my first and second draft

In my second draft I did not make many changes as my article is simply an interview, however I had to cut down a lot of my interview to make it fit into the space. I gathered what I found to be the best and most interesting questions and compiled them together. I also introduced a opening statement they lets the reader know what they are about to read. This was important because in my first draft I did not have any introduction to the product and to a reader who doesn't know what my magazine usually features, then they would be confused by this.